PC Ford tapped on the screen, waiting for the appropriate pages to load; these new tablets probably were the way forward but it didn’t take this long to find a new page in a notebook. (Location 72)
Note: Porblem - whose view
There was no box on the screen into which Ford could type the phrase ‘a little defensive’. (Location 92)
Note: No control over voice - author?
The profile of her face was outlined by that lurid light. (Location 103)
Note: Why no description of old woman? We dont rly care co.pare mrs palfrey at the claremont
After his customary Thursday night dinner of baked beans on toast – “a balanced and nutritious meal that you should not feel ashamed of” according to the booklet he had bought for twenty pence on a market stall, ‘Healthy Eating for Happy Singles’ (Location 3771)
